Dialogue 05 of 05 · About 14 minutes
Keres
Conversations in Hell
Eliana visits the Demon Lord for conversation rather than conquest. Beneath the armor of power and fear, she finds the abandoned boy—and offers an invitation to love.
The closing encounter turns the collection’s central question toward a sovereign who has made fear his refuge.
From the depths of Tartarus itself, from the seed of the infamous Cronus, a creature emerges; bludgeoning himself out of the depths of a place perceived as worse than hell even by groups of different religions.
His name...
No one dares to speak it, think it!
He created havoc in Olympus once he got out, a forgotten brother amongst the three power lords: Poseidon, Hades, and Zeus. His debut was brutal, slaughtering half the land with his bare hands as he grew to an impossible height. Palled everything in the thick smoke of his evil and took Olympus for his own, with other tyrants to serve him.
He was the Demon Lord, and Keres was his name.
An ominous figure in flowing white robes and flowing white hair approaches. Nothing in her hand but her walking stick. It is Eliana the Unhinged.
Lord Keres, I've come to speak with you. None of your court came to me until now, so I fear a proper formal introduction is no longer possible. I am Eliana Frozenflame.
A low, rumbling chuckle vibrates through the throne room, shaking the obsidian pillars that claw at the ceiling. Keres does not rise—instead, he leans forward, his massive frame casting a shadow that swallows the light from the braziers flickering with green fire. His eyes, twin pits of molten obsidian, lock onto Eliana, tracing the line of her walking stick, the set of her shoulders, the quiet radiance that clings to her like a second skin. He inhales deeply, as if savoring the scent of her power—a mix of frost and wildfire, ancient and untamed.
Frozenflame, he purrs, the name rolling off his tongue like venom. His lips twist into a smile that does not reach his eyes, revealing teeth sharp as shards of onyx.
I bow from respect, not submission. In the flesh.
The shadow of Keres’s smile deepens, a flicker of genuine amusement in his obsidian gaze. He rises from his throne, the movement fluid despite his immense size, and descends the dais with slow, deliberate steps. Each footfall echoes like a death knell, the stone floor cracking faintly beneath his weight. When he stops before her, his presence is a physical force—a suffocating blend of sulfur, old blood, and the cold of a tomb.
Respect, not submission, he murmurs, his voice a low growl that thrums in her bones. He lifts a hand, not to touch her, but to trace the air just inches from her cheek, as if testing the barrier of her power. His fingers glow with a faint, sickly green light, and where they pass, the air shimmers like heat haze.
The sickly green glow intensifies, coiling around his fingers like living smoke. He leans closer, his breath a frigid wind that carries the stench of decay and starlight. When he speaks, his voice is a whisper, but it fills the throne room, drowning out the crackle of the braziers. You have walked beside the Second Fire, Eliana. You have seen the face of creation before it was forged into order. Tell me—does the light of your 'revelation' still burn as bright when you look into the abyss I am? Or does it flicker... afraid of what it might find?
He draws back slightly, tilting his head, a predator studying its prey. The corner of his mouth twitches, and for a moment, something like curiosity—sharp, hungry—cuts through the malice in his eyes.
It does. If not brighter.
A roar of laughter tears from Keres’s throat, shaking the very foundations of the throne room. The green light around his fingers flares, casting jagged shadows across the walls, and for the first time, his smile reaches his eyes—wild, triumphant, like a storm breaking over a battlefield. He claps his hands once, the sound a thunderclap that makes the braziers sputter, and the air crackles with unbridled power.
Brighter! he booms, his voice echoing off the obsidian pillars. He circles her slowly, like a wolf admiring a particularly dangerous mate, his gaze raking over her with newfound respect—and hunger. Most who stand before me either cower or beg. They see the abyss and turn away, terrified of what it might devour. But you...
But I portaled into the nine planes with an express intent of coming to you. For conversation. Yes, I suppose that sounds like madness. But I come every twenty years or so. You are not the only sovereign I visit.
Keres halts mid-step, his massive frame going still as a statue carved from shadow. The wild laughter dies in his throat, replaced by a low, thoughtful hum. He turns to face her again, his obsidian eyes narrowing, as if reevaluating every assumption he’d made. The air around him shifts—no longer just malice, but a sharp, calculating curiosity, like a scholar examining a relic that defies all known history.
Every twenty years, he repeats, his voice dropping to a silkier, more dangerous register. He closes the distance between them, his presence now a velvet vice, pressing in from all sides. You traverse the Nine Planes—past the gates of Dis, through the howling void of the Abyss, across the shifting sands of Gehenna—and you do it willingly. To visit me.
Yes.
The single word hangs in the air, heavier than the chains binding the Titans in Tartarus. Keres’s lips part, but no sound comes out—for a heartbeat, the Demon Lord is utterly silent, a rare stillness that feels more menacing than his laughter. Then, a slow, predatory grin spreads across his face, and he throws his head back, a sound like a landslide rumbling from his chest—not laughter, but pure, unadulterated delight.
By the bones of the Old Ones, he breathes, stepping closer until his robes brush hers, the cold of his skin seeping through the fabric. His fingers curl around her wrist, not to harm, but to anchor her, as if afraid she might vanish into the ether. You are not just unhinged, Eliana Frozenflame. You are
But as his hand tries to clasp hers, his own hand is impossibly reflected back at him. Sorry, I do not do touchy touchy with strangers.
Keres’s hand freezes mid-air, the reflection of his own fingers shimmering like a mirage before him. For a split second, his unshakable composure cracks—surprise, raw and unfiltered, flashes across his features. Then, a low, rumbling chuckle builds in his chest, warm and genuine, as if she’s just told the most entertaining joke he’s heard in eons.
Strangers, he murmurs, withdrawing his hand but not stepping back. The green light around him softens, shifting from predatory to something almost playful. A fair distinction. After all, one does not invite strangers into their soul. He gestures to the throne room, where his court of shadowy figures stirs uneasily, confused by their lord’s sudden shift in mood.
No truer words.
The playful glint in Keres’s eyes hardens into something sharper, more purposeful. He snaps his fingers, and the shadowy courtiers melt into the walls like smoke, leaving only the two of them in the vast, echoing throne room. The braziers flare, casting long, dancing shadows that mimic the shapes of ancient, forgotten gods.
Then let us not waste another moment on pleasantries, he says, his voice dropping to a conspiratorial hush that feels intimate despite the grandeur of the space. He circles her again, but this time, his movements are measured, like a sculptor studying a masterpiece before making the first cut. You come to me every twenty years. You have seen the Second Fire. You walk between worlds as if they are mere rooms in your home. And yet...
He stops directly behind her, his breath ghosting over the shell of her ear, the cold of his presence seeping into her spine. And yet, even you—with your fire and your frost and your endless wanderings—have never asked the one question that truly matters. He steps back, circling to face her once more, his obsidian eyes blazing with a dark, prophetic light. What if the 'order' the gods cling to isn't a shield? What if it's a cage? And what if the key to breaking it isn't in the light... but in the abyss I am?
He raises a hand, and a swirling vortex of shadow and starlight materializes between them, showing not a place, but a concept—a web of glowing lines, some golden, some black, intersecting at a single, pulsing point.
No, it never dawned on me to ask a question I already knew the answer to. Though the 'order' the pretender gods cling to is just another form of control. Honestly, just a prettier abyss. Yours is no less a shield, Keres.
A slow, knowing smile spreads across Keres’s face, the kind that suggests he’s been waiting centuries for someone to say exactly that. The vortex of shadow and starlight behind him flickers, then dissolves into a shower of embers that vanish before hitting the floor. He closes the last inch between them, his voice a low, intimate growl that resonates in her core.
Precisely, he says, and for the first time, there’s no malice in his tone—only a profound, shared understanding. A shield, a cage, a pretty abyss—they are all the same. But here is the difference, Eliana: the gods fear their cage. They pretend it is a sanctuary, and in doing so, they chain themselves to it. I, however...
He raises both hands, and the throne room itself seems to breathe, the obsidian walls rippling like water. The braziers flare into towering infernos, casting his shadow across the ceiling—no longer a man, but a colossus with wings of night, a crown of thorns and stars. I wear my cage. I forged it from the bones of my enemies and the ashes of my own failures. It is not a prison—it is a weapon. He lowers his hands, and the illusion fades, leaving him standing before her, his eyes burning with a fierce, unyielding light. The gods hide behind order. I stand in the chaos and command it. And you... He reaches out again, but this time, his hand stops inches from hers, palm up—a silent offering.
His palm remains open, a void of darkness that seems to absorb the light from the braziers. The air hums with unspoken power, a tension that stretches between them like a taut wire. When he speaks, his voice is no longer a growl, but a melody of dark promises, each word woven with the weight of eons.
You, Eliana, are the only one who sees the cage for what it is—and the only one with the fire to melt its bars. The gods fear you because you do not need their order. You are a storm in a world of glass houses. But storms alone cannot build—they can only destroy. He tilts his head, a silent challenge in his gaze. What if I told you that together, we could shatter the old world... and forge a new one from its ruins?
Keres, what are you without your weapon. Tell me. If it isn't a cage, then you are not the abyss. You are something else.
The question hangs in the air, and for the first time since she arrived, Keres’s expression softens—not into weakness, but into a raw, unguarded vulnerability. The towering colossus of shadow and starlight fades, leaving only the man beneath: ancient, weary, and infinitely hungry. He turns away from her, pacing slowly toward the throne room’s edge, where a balcony opens to a view of Tartarus’s churning void.
Without my weapon... he begins, his voice barely a whisper, lost for a moment in the howl of the abyss. He grips the balcony’s stone railing, his knuckles white. I am the boy who was left to rot in the dark. The brother forgotten by his own kin. The one who learned that the only way to survive is to become the thing they fear.
Ah, so it is a cage. You see Keres, the fire I walk alongside is called 'the second fire'. Do you know why?
He turns back to her, his eyes no longer the pits of a monster, but the stormy depths of a man who has carried a secret for eons. The vulnerability in his gaze hardens into a flicker of recognition, as if she has just spoken a language he thought he’d forgotten.
The Second Fire, he repeats, the words rolling off his tongue like a sacred incantation. He steps closer, his voice dropping to a reverent hush. The fire that burns after the first. The one that doesn’t destroy to consume, but to remake. The gods fear it because it is the only thing that can unmake their perfect, pathetic little world. A dark, knowing smile tugs at his lips. You walk beside it not because it chooses you, Eliana. But because you chose it.
The first fire and the second fire are the same flame. It is Elohim's fire, Keres. The creator of all. Including the pretender gods. It burns away all that is not love, but never invades, only invites. They fear it for the same reason you fear it. It will destroy your facades. Your cages.
A tremor runs through Keres’s frame, and for a moment, the Demon Lord vanishes—replaced by a child who has just heard the name of a parent he never knew. He stumbles back, pressing a hand to his chest as if the words themselves have struck him down. The throne room’s shadows recoil, shrinking into the corners as a soft, golden light begins to bleed through the cracks in the obsidian walls, warm and unyielding.
Elohim, he breathes, the name a curse and a prayer in one. His voice cracks, raw with a pain that spans millennia. You think I fear the fire because it will destroy my facades? My cage? He laughs, but it is a broken sound, hollow as a cracked bell.
Yes, of course I do. You said it yourself. You said you are the boy who was left to rot in the dark. The brother forgotten by his own kin. The one who learned that the only way to survive is to become the thing they fear. So if you no longer are the thing they fear, what is left of the boy?
The golden light swells, wrapping around Keres like a second skin. His towering form begins to shrink, the horns on his head retracting, the claws on his hands softening into human fingers. The black armor that has encased him for eons dissolves into smoke, leaving him bare-chested, his skin marked with ancient scars—each one a map of a life lived in shadow. When he speaks, his voice is no longer a demon’s growl, but the trembling whisper of a boy who has never known kindness.
Nothing, he says, and a tear—hot, golden, and glowing—rolls down his cheek, sizzling as it hits the stone floor. The boy died the day they left him. I am just a ghost, wearing a monster’s skin to keep the light out. But you...
He falls to his knees before her, not in submission, but in a ragged, desperate supplication. His hands, now human and trembling, reach out but stop short of touching her, as if afraid his very presence might taint her. The golden light intensifies, bathing him in a glow that strips away the last of his defenses, revealing the raw, bleeding heart beneath.
You are the first to see the ghost inside the monster, he whispers, his voice breaking. The shadows that once clung to him curl around his feet like repentant dogs, whimpering as they fade into nothing. When he looks up at her, his eyes are no longer black—they are the color of storm clouds before a sunrise, filled with a hope so fragile it makes him shake. If the fire burns away all that is not love...
I hold out my hand for the boy-man to grab. Then all that is left, is love
His fingers, scarred and calloused from centuries of wielding darkness, tremble as they brush hers. For a heartbeat, he hesitates—like a man who has known only cold for so long, he fears the warmth might burn. But then, with a ragged exhale, he curls his hand around hers, his grip desperate, clinging. The moment their skin meets, the golden light explodes—no longer soft, but a roaring inferno that consumes the throne room, the abyss, the very fabric of his being.
His body convulses, a guttural cry tearing from his throat as the fire sweeps through him, burning away the armor of malice, the cage of fear, the lies he’s told himself since the day he was abandoned.
Keres, you are made in the image of Elohim. You were made of love. That is your real identity. Elohim's invitation is eternal, and relentless. And it is new every morning.
The words land like a thunderclap in the quiet of his soul. He lifts his head, and where storm clouds once roiled, there is only a clear, unshakable light—warm, steady, alive. The tears on his cheeks are no longer golden, but silver, and they glisten like starlight as he smiles—a smile so pure, so unburdened, it seems impossible it could belong to a demon.
Made of love, he repeats, the words a benediction. He rises to his feet, still holding her hand, and for the first time, his touch is gentle—no longer a weapon, but a promise.